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Critiques? Constructive comments? No? I'll destroy this innocent table! (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
Loljk. /derp

because I can't think of a title.

I actually finished this since May 23.
I promised I won't upload anything til I have a new icon. ^^;
Sorry 'bout the amount of errors you might notice in my drawing. Haha whatever.. .___.

I've been lazy and busy since I moved to Hawai'i, and now that I'm back here in Philippines, I'm too busy. xD
Anyway, thanks to my bro for fixin' the blurry scan quality. (Canvas can hardly fit in the scanner. fffff)

My and ~Alexcoreable's Gaia Online avatar.

Media:
Watercolor
Canson Watercolor pad

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Great!
The contrasting colors are beautiful, as is the gentle transition from brown to ivory, eventually to white.


However, I think making the shading a bit darker would emphasize their features a little more, especially in the bottom girl's tummy.

Also, I think making the yellow in the blue girl's hair a bit darker would even out the darkness in her outfit.
But other than that, I really like this piece! The outfits are awesome, and the different poses are both expressive and dynamic!

This is a really great piece! The proportions are perfect, and the blades are shaded very well. Keep up the good work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/>